Division
Which structure works best for your thesis?
Parallelism
Whenever possible, in writing an outline, coordinate heads
should be expressed in parallel form. That is, nouns should be made
parallel with nouns, verb forms with verb forms, adjectives with
adjectives, and so on (Example: Nouns: computers, programs, users; Verbs:
to compute, to program, to use; Adjectives: home computers, new programs,
experienced users). Although parallel structure is desired, logical and
clear writing should not be sacrificed simply to maintain parallelism.
(For example, there are times when nouns and gerunds at the same level of
an outline are acceptable.) Reasonableness and flexibility of form is
preferred to rigidity.
Coordination
In outlining, those items which are of equal significance have
comparable numeral or letter designations: an A is equal to a B,
a 1 to a 2, an a to a b, etc. Coordinates
should be seen as having the same value. Coordination is a principle that
enables a writer to maintain a coherent and consistent document.
Correct coordination:
- A. Word processing programs
- B. Database programs
- C. Spreadsheet programs
Faulty coordination:
A. Word processing programs
B. Microsoft Word
C. Page Maker
Explanation: Word is a type of word processing program and
should be treated as a subdivision. Page Maker is a type of desktop
publishing program. One way to correct coordination would be:
- A. Types of programs
- 1. Word processing
- 2. Desktop publishing
- B. Evaluation of programs
- 1. Word processing
- a. Word
b. Word Perfect
- 2. Desktop Publishing
- a. Page Maker
b. Quark Express
Subordination
In order to indicate levels of significance, an outline uses major and
minor headings. Thus in ordering ideas, you should organize it from
general to specific or from abstract to concrete- the more general or
abstract the term, the higher the level or rank in the outline. This
principle allows your material to be ordered in terms of logic and
requires a clear articulation of the relationship between component parts
used in the outline. Subdivisions of each higher division should always
have the same relationship to the whole.
Correct subordination
- A. Word processing programs
- 1. Microsoft Word
- 2. Word Perfect
- B. Desktop publishing programs
- 1. PageMaker
- 2. Quark Express
Faulty subordination
- A. Word processing programs
- 1. Word
- 2. Useful
- 3. Obsolete
Explanation: There is an A without a B. Also 1, 2,
and 3 are not equal; Word is a type of word processing program, and
useful and obsolete are qualities. One way to correct this
faulty subordination is:
- A. Word
- 1. Positive features
- 2. Negative features
- B. Word Perfect
- 1. Positive features
- 2. Negative features
Division
To divide you always need at least two parts; therefore, there can
never be an A without a B, a 1 without a 2, an
a without a b, etc. Usually there is more than one way to
divide parts; however, when dividing use only one basis of division at
each rank, and make the basis of division as sharp as possible.
Correct division
- A. Personal computers: hardware
- 1. Types
- 2. Cost
- 3. Maintenance
- B. Personal computers: software
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Faulty division
- A. Computers
- 1. Mainframe
- 2. Micro
- a. Floppy disk
b. Hard disk
- B. Computer uses
- 1. Institutional
- 2. Personal